Jounal!

Recently, lots of national soccer teams were very busy because of world cup qualifying match. However, lots of soccer clubs suffered from temporary transfer. So, many coaches of popular club which has lots of good players feel uncomfortable because their club’s strength is decreased. Therefore, this situation always leads to conflict between national team coaches and club team coach. In case of national team, coaches insist that national team has a right to pick the players. In case of club team, coaches assert that national teams have to allow us to pick our players because they are ours. I think that national teams have to respects club’s decision because they are paying money for them and they know well player’s condition than others.

First of all, football club team pays lots of money for players. They pay lots of money to player so as to make a good record in their league. The amount of money is really huge. For example, Real Madrid, a famous Spanish football club, made a contract with Christiano Ronaldo. He receives over 20 million per week. Let’s think about it. If he went to his country to play a national team game and he injured during the game, the club loses lots of money. Needless to say, the player wants to play for his country. However, he has to follow the club’s decision because the club has a right about the player during the contract. Also, the national team coaches and citizens should understand the player who is under this condition. Therefore, national team coaches have to follow club’s decision because they pay lots of money to players.

Second, football club team knows well player’s body condition than national team coach. Many famous football clubs have an excellent system to manage their players, so they have a lot of data for each player. Accordingly they can know easily their health condition based on lots of data such as team doctor’s body checking list and training coaches’ opinion. However, national team coaches don’t have any data of the player about current condition. Hence, their immoderate decision leads the player to injure. For example, Ji Sung Park, Korean, is in Manchester United, famous football club in English premier league. His condition was really bad, but the national team coaches wanted him because he is a key player in national team. At the end, he played for national team and was injured. Therefore, I think that national teams have to understand clubs’ decision for teams and players.

To sum up, national teams should agree with the club’s decision because clubs pay lots of money for the players and know well their condition. Even though players have a pride by playing for own country, both national team and club team have to think the player’s condition at first and respect their decision.

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Research Paper
Outline
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Should the instant replay remain in effect in the NFL? Should it be extended to other sports as well?
Thesis statement: The instant replay performs a role in sports game, so I will explain what the instant play is,
1. History of Instant replay applied in sports and the instant replay technology.
A. Instant replay was first used in the NFL starting in the 1986 season.
B. Instant replay’s origins: the company of Ampex invented in the mid 1950.
C. instant replay is a technology that play back preview playing on television.

2. Opinions of the instant replay applied in sports.
A. athletes and coaches want to do instant replay during game.
B. spectators and umpires do not want to do instant replay during game.

3. What kind of sports uses instant replay system or not use? And how does the instant replay apply in these sports?
A. Use instant replay system.
a. Football
b. Basketball
c. Baseball
d. Tennis
e. Motorsports
B. Not use instant replay system.
a. Soccer
4. What is the advantage when the rule is published?
A. conflict will be disappeared between coaches and umpires.
a. Many coaches admit umpire’s judgments after reviewing instant review.
b. Claim rate is decreased after publishing this rule.
B. players can concentrate on their playing during the game.
a. Players trust umpire’s decision.

5. What is the disadvantage when the rule is published?
A. playing time is increase because of waiting umpire’s decision.
a. the audience feel boring during reviewing time.
b. the game will be loose because the game is stopped
B. audiences don’t fully believe umpire’s decision.
a. when the umpires’ first judgment is not correct, the audience tend to doubt them.

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A. Topic:
should the instant replay remain in effect in the NFL? Should it be extended to other sports as well????

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Jounal 5.

Have you ever parked your car on street parking spot? If your answer is yes, you know that the street parking is very convenient. These days, city of Champaign is promoting “green and white” policy. The policy is that sidewalk makes to be widely by getting rid of space of street parking and encourage using transportation. Decreasing a street parking spot has good and bad effects to student and others. The good things are about viewing and environment, while bad things are about parking problem and discomfort for students.
First of all, there are two elements that will be enhanced by this policy. At first, the campus will have a better view because lots of parking cars will banish on the street. Actually, the parking cars on the street don’t help to make beautiful campus. So, students want to walk around the campus because there are lots of beautiful streets on the campus. Another advantage is that we can prevent air pollution. Actually many students use their cars to go to class, and they park their cars on the street parking spot that is around classroom. After finishing construction that gets rid of street parking spot, many people have to take a bus and walk in order to go to class. As a result, many students cannot use their car, and we can prevent air pollution. Moreover, we can save a fuel thanks to this policy. Therefore, making beautiful campus and preventing air pollution are good effects.
Second, there are two bad effects by policy. At first, the parking problem will increase because the parking spot is decreased. The campus already has a big parking problem. For example, when I drove to class, I couldn’t find parking spot. So, I had to drive same way again and again to find the spot. Moreover, I spent lots of time to find spot, so I was late. After finishing construction, this problem will be worsening. Another problem is that students will feel uncomfortable. Once they have to park their cars on the parking lot that is far from their classroom when they takes own car to go class. After that, they have to choose taking a bus or walk. As a result, they will feel uncomfortable. Therefore, increasing parking problem and feeling uncomfortable are bad effects.
To sum up, the new policy of Champaign will bring two different results: good or bad. Actually, I think that this policy is good for both students and campus because we will be adapted to bad thing.

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Compare & Contrast Outline.

Topic: Printed book VS electronic book
Introduction

Thesis statement: There are three big differences in cost, an ability of storage, and an aspect of protecting of environment.

Body

1st Topic: Electronic material and printed material contains same contents, but their cost is slightly different.
Supporting detail:
1. The printed material don’t need to use device to read the material, but the electronic material require expensive devices
2. Electronic book is cheap, but the printed book is expensive.
2nd Topic: E-book and book have differences and similarity about ability of storage.
Supporting detail:
1. E-book depends on the device’s memory or computer’s, but the book depends on size of bookcase.
2. Both materials can easy to find the book I want.
3rd Topic: what e-books and physical books produce makes environmental problems, but it is affected different ways by environment.
Supporting detail
1. Printed material destroys the forest, but the E-book leads to global warming because of using lots of electricity.
Conclusion
Wrap up: Three main differences parts such as cost, storage and environments is between E-book and paper book.

Outline for cause and effects

Outline
>Introduction
Topic: Drinking a coffee
Topic sentence: People who drink a coffee everyday can get various advantages from coffee.
Thesis statement: Drinking a coffee brings us several good effects: developing blood circulation, making more concentration, and preventing various diseases.

>Body
-Topic 1
Topic sentence: Drinking a coffee makes us to develop blood circulation.
Supporting detail:
1. Caffeine that coffee contains leads to makes better blood circulation system of our body
2. According to research (University of Madrid), drinking a coffee extend life > because of developing blood circulation.
-Topic2
Topic sentence: Drinking a coffee leads us to get more concentration.
Supporting detail:
1. We can get an effect like a stimulant by drinking a coffee.
2. Example: my experience > during final > drop my concentration > drink a coffee
>can keep concentration.
Topic3.
Topic sentence: Those who drink a cup of coffee everyday can prevent various diseases.
Supporting detail:
1. Coffee contains a material to get rid of cell that leads to dementia.
2. According to the magazine (WebMD), the caffeine that coffee contains will prevent diabetes and high blood pressure.

>Conclusion
1. Three major effects for blood circulation, concentration, and disease are caused by coffee.2. However, if you overuse, you can get side effects

Why do the car company makes super car?

Have you ever seen fancy car on the road? Today, many car companies are making a super car that has a high technology and best performance such as AUDI R8, Nissan GTR, and Lamborghini. Also, the car's price is minimum ten thousands. Many people has a dream to drive and make the car as own car. However, car companies aren't selling lots of super cars now because the price is too high. Why do the car companies want to make and show super car? There are two specific reasons. The reasons are marketing and pride.

First of all, most car companies produce car that has a high technology to use for marketing. Producing supercar is very useful method to inform consumers their ability. Moreover, consumers have a confidence to the company, so when they need a new car, they will choose the company’s car although they cannot buy a supercar. Consumers think that the company has a better technology than other companies that cannot make a supercar. As a result, they expect better quality to lower level car. For example, Nissan, Japanese Car Company, didn’t have supercar few years ago. At that time, they had a problem to sell their cars because their technology is insufficient to compete with other companies. They determined to focus on producing a car that has all technology as good as possible. As a result, they launched their supercar, so many people interested their supercar and company. Thanks to launching show, their sales are increased. Therefore, making a supercar helps companies to increase sales.

Second, car companies think that supercar is same with their pride. Whenever new supercar is launched, it is compared every parts and performance with others on the media such as television show and magazine. Almost car companies are very sensitive to compare because of their pride. Especially, the car companies are sharper comparing engine. The reason is that engine is like a heart. For example, when one company made a supercar, they emphasized how fast the car goes 0 to 60mph. It is like a criterion to compare an engine. So, many car companies invest lots of money to develop their technology for making a better engine. Therefore, producing a high tech car is important to keep their pride.

To sum up, most car companies has a dream to make a better supercar than others because of marketing and pride. Lots of major car companies want to beat others by making a new engine, so this competition will be endless. However, I think that this competition have to change topic from faster engine to efficient engine.